Oktapodi

FIRST DRAFT

The octopodi text is a writing description of a video, this was a little bit difficult, because I have to include some details, and some details, was missing in my writing. I like it so much the video was funny, but his description was longer.

Final text:

Octopodi

In a fish tank store in Grace, two octopus are hugging in a fish tank, but the fish store owner took the female octopus, called Julia and put her in a cooler to deliver at the deliveryman.

The deliveryman, put the cooler in the car and start to move, the male octopus called Pablo can’t stay and do nothing, so Pablo jump outside the fish tank and hold of the back part of the car. when the deliveryman start to run the car, Pablo begin move to the front part of the car, but the deliveryman scares when see the octopus in the window, so he stop the car for a second and Pablo flys till  the windscreen, the handbrake and the deliveryman lose the control of the car, Pablo and Anna flying through the air and they fall down to the street. The driver try to knock down, but they jump in a swimpool and scape from him. They jumped from pool to pool to escape the delivery, but the found a street where interceptors could and when they jumped to the other pool's caught again.

then continued walking down the street the car teetered and tottered, but Julia and Paul began to lethal ink to the dealer, they could not see and even had subjects, and octopuses were grabbed wires where people hang their clothes to dry . The car left the road and fell into open water. Octopuses were suspended on wires but came a gable and took of Paul and took him to the now, but Julia not going to let it librarian is grab the railings of the terraces had close and use the cable as a pitcher, I went to reach Pablo fired in the air.