My favorite place : La Tirana

My favorite place.

1^st draft & corrections too:

My favorite place I say that is La Tirana, because is one of my favorite memories, when a were a child, my family gone to La Tirana for the celebration, My mom said that I had scored at the fireworks, but know I love that memories, and I like to have a house there to go to time to time, but I don’t have one so I just have to resign myself.

Final text: With all the correction of the picture.

My favorite place.

My favorite place it can be the town of “La Tirana”, because it is small without much people. I like walk around it, go at the church or stay at home and listen to music. Sometimes I think in L Tirana, and I feel well and happy. In my mind will be started to appear the images of dancers, songs, etc.

That place make me feel in peace, without problems, the trees are big and strong, sometimes I think that I’m sitting on it. I like see all he houses around the church and see all the people buying something to eat or drink. Also I like to stay inside the church and see all the details, but the best thing inside the church is the celling. When I am there I just stay watching the celling and thinking different types of things.