Final reflexion

For do this blog was difficult to me make areflexion about, my works, but was fanny too, I like to do it. But I really see that I lean a lot about punctuation, and all the types of paragraph. I enjoy doing the blog.

A morning person/ night person

I am an Early Bird

This my brain storm

Some questions about, why I am a morning person

This paragra h was, easy to do, but I don’t like it so much, was one of the first things that we write, and in that moment I couldn’t see my advances. I feel like if I don’t learn anything.

This is the final work, When I deliver the work I thought that it was nice and without any mistake, but it seems that I didn't check it very well due to the fact that even there are faults and faults of typing also.

Final text:

I am an Early Bird

I like the morning because have more time. The morning makes me feel good. I can do all kind of things, do my bedroom and go out with my mom. I like listening to music in the morning and sing my favorites songs. In the morning I can have breakfast with my family, but now I wake up early to go to the university so I can’t have breakfast with them.

My favorite person

Describing people

The description of my father was easy to do, because I know him, and I already think how my father is. The difficult part was written, with the correct words, the first paragraph is the description physically, and the second paragraph is the psychological description.

Oktapodi

FIRST DRAFT

The octopodi text is a writing description of a video, this was a little bit difficult, because I have to include some details, and some details, was missing in my writing. I like it so much the video was funny, but his description was longer.

Final text:

Octopodi

In a fish tank store in Grace, two octopus are hugging in a fish tank, but the fish store owner took the female octopus, called Julia and put her in a cooler to deliver at the deliveryman.

The deliveryman, put the cooler in the car and start to move, the male octopus called Pablo can’t stay and do nothing, so Pablo jump outside the fish tank and hold of the back part of the car. when the deliveryman start to run the car, Pablo begin move to the front part of the car, but the deliveryman scares when see the octopus in the window, so he stop the car for a second and Pablo flys till  the windscreen, the handbrake and the deliveryman lose the control of the car, Pablo and Anna flying through the air and they fall down to the street. The driver try to knock down, but they jump in a swimpool and scape from him. They jumped from pool to pool to escape the delivery, but the found a street where interceptors could and when they jumped to the other pool's caught again.

then continued walking down the street the car teetered and tottered, but Julia and Paul began to lethal ink to the dealer, they could not see and even had subjects, and octopuses were grabbed wires where people hang their clothes to dry . The car left the road and fell into open water. Octopuses were suspended on wires but came a gable and took of Paul and took him to the now, but Julia not going to let it librarian is grab the railings of the terraces had close and use the cable as a pitcher, I went to reach Pablo fired in the air.

Introduction to my Blog

Introduction to my blog…  Hello :)
My name is Yessenia Torres Herrera, I have 19 years old, I born and grow in the Iquique City, I like to listen to music, especially pop music, and I’m studying The English Teaching Program in the Arturo Prat University.

This Blog contains all the works that my classmates and I, had done during this semester, I hope do you like and if you want to write some comment you are free to do it.

¡Welcome to my Blog! 

My favorite place : La Tirana

My favorite place.

1^st draft & corrections too:

My favorite place I say that is La Tirana, because is one of my favorite memories, when a were a child, my family gone to La Tirana for the celebration, My mom said that I had scored at the fireworks, but know I love that memories, and I like to have a house there to go to time to time, but I don’t have one so I just have to resign myself.

Final text: With all the correction of the picture.

My favorite place.

My favorite place it can be the town of “La Tirana”, because it is small without much people. I like walk around it, go at the church or stay at home and listen to music. Sometimes I think in L Tirana, and I feel well and happy. In my mind will be started to appear the images of dancers, songs, etc.

That place make me feel in peace, without problems, the trees are big and strong, sometimes I think that I’m sitting on it. I like see all he houses around the church and see all the people buying something to eat or drink. Also I like to stay inside the church and see all the details, but the best thing inside the church is the celling. When I am there I just stay watching the celling and thinking different types of things.

My favorite Holiday in the year is Christmas

My favorite holiday in the year.

1^st draft:                                                     

 

  1^st text with correction:

This text, was a little difficult because I didn’t know what write, but I think in all the Christmas with my family, when they look at my when they smile, etc. then I just start to write, then I stopped, and read my writing. Then I add some new thing, and then I begin to correct my text, I make the mistakes, and write some things that was missing. Then I write my text again with all the corrections.

Final text: with all the corrections.

My favorite holiday in the year.

My favorite holiday in the year is Christmas, I like to give gifts to my family: such as cousins, my aunt, my uncle, my sister, my niece and nephew, my mom and dad. I know that the gifts are not the most important thing in Christmas, but is the best form in which the families can show how much they love. My mom and I, put the Christmas tree in December 8^th. I like to make cookies, so always we try to make the best cookies to eat in the Christmas night. My Mother and Father, try to buy gifts for all my cousins and they buy boots of candies for all of them, to give them on 24^th, before the midnight. In the Christmas dinner, we talk about the family that is far away from us, and remembered the people who is not with us anymore, like my grandparents or some of my aunts and uncles. This is a tradition in my family group and I love it.